Untitled-Help me think of one?

This is my submission for an art contest. I'm really happy with how this came out EXCEPT I MESSED UP THE LINES WHEN I SAVED IT AND I CAN'T FIX IT Especially because I haven't draw a full, non-chibi, manga style person for a while. AND LOOK!!! THE HANDS LOOK LIKE HANDS!!!! That's a very special achievement for me Um, there were a couple places where the coloring went out of/ didn't reach the lines, so if you spot one would you point it out to me please? Thanks X3
EXCEPT I MESSED UP THE LINES WHEN I SAVED IT AND I CAN'T FIX IT
It was originally a lot lighter, but I put a layer over it to make it darker, and now it might be too dark. What do you think?


And I need a really cool title but I can't think of one :/ Help me out?